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Saturday, February 12, 2005

It gets verse
Well, it seems we are finally going for a skiing trip tomorrow!!!!! Very excited, coz - I've never seen snow - ain't that so "uncool" :) So thought of jotting down my thoughts in a "visual poem". I always felt that the visual aspect of poetry is in the mind and wanted to write something that's visual on paper. So, since I'm going to a mountain area I thought of writing a "hill shaped poem". Whatever! Have a nice Sunday!

Nice
Lovely Ice
Painted with snow
Miracles of white glow
Hush, calm quiet serene land
Endless mass of crystal frozen sand
Beauty beckons us, n' the calmness calls
The desire deepens n' the mind's image enthralls ...

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Nice
Lovely Ice
Painted with snow
Miracles of white glow
Hush, calm quiet serene land
Endless mass of crystal frozen sand
Beauty beckons us, n' the calmness calls
The desire deepens n' the mind's image enthralls
To bask in 'n breathe, the very warmth of the nip, its tinge
Glide 'n soar 'n whiz 'cross the endless maze, but mind you, don't cringe
 
(a) thanks Biplab for extending and (b) a trend that i was following (though i dint mention) was that every line had one extra word compared to the prev line - so in that case the chain is broken :(
 
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